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Thursday 10 May 2018

word vomit

So the old wrinkly man looked like a monopoly piece that you push around the board.

He looks happy,because he is smiling like he's won an award and his wrinkles tell you
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  1. Anonymous10 May 2018 at 14:15

    I love the description of the old man and creative :) and he does look happy

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  2. Anonymous10 May 2018 at 14:15

    Hi Tanaya
    I like how you added the reference to the Monopoly board - this made the description of the man much more vivid.

    Next time you could work on quantity of writing instead of quality - don't worry, sometimes I find it difficult to write a lot.

    Did you enjoy writing about this?

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